Computers
I wish this computer hadn't frozen.
I wish I could get the USB ports to work.
I wish this computer had more memory.
I wish my husband was here.
I wish technology wasn't so fickle.
I wish I could fix this.
I wish we could figure out the problem.
I wish...
I chose to write a how-to write a poem yesterday, because I was having a lot of problems with my computer. An "I wish" is a poem has eight to ten lines and each line begins with "I wish". This was a fun poem to write and I hope you have fun writing one too.
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This doesn't really seem much like poetry to me. It seems like a list. Granted, poetry is in the eye of the reader, but it doesn't work for me.
ReplyDeleteThis doesnt even really seem like a poem.More like a list :(
ReplyDeletehttp://rayrayswriting.blogspot.com/2009/05/how-to-write-i-wish-poem-part-2.html
ReplyDeletePlease go here if you think my poem is too much of a list and you can write your own "I Wish" poem in the comment section. I will then make a special post for all the poems.
I think the poem's fine, I Wish poems are "listy" poems. And so are What Bugs Me poems. Think of Shel Silverstein's classic poem for kids, Sic. It lists lot of ailments. Usually, I write I Wish poems like this:
ReplyDeleteI Wish...
I had an exciting adventure. I had some s'mores to eat.
I have a "vacation getaway"
...etc
it can rhyme if you want, but I don't like making it rhyme.
I always do 10 lines.
-a poet
i am looking for an i wish poem about anything give me some info thanxxxxxxx
ReplyDeletehewy wats up im looking for an i wish poem im in junior high i want a poem about anything thanxxxxxxxxxxx keep me updated
ReplyDeleteIm also in junior high and looking for a good i wish poem.
ReplyDeleteyou guys a i wish poem is when you say something like this;
ReplyDeleteI wish i was a forest full of tree
Blocking
out all the people
who want to cut down the trees
and saving endangered animals
and plants forever.